June 9, 2004

Slowly

Just because you turn
slowly slowly
to check her out
slowly
as she walks past

doesn't mean

that she don't notice.

What do you think?

i've noticed that people
don't notice people
focusing intently
at nothing

Posted by: other dan at June 10, 2004 7:17 AM

Two feet higher.
Thats where
she said
her eyes were.

Posted by: Arcadian Del Sol at June 11, 2004 6:37 AM

would be interesting to switch genders and see if it works:

Just because you turn
slowly slowly
to check him out
slowly
as he walks past
doesn't mean
that he don't notice.

does it? if not, why not? you need to write a thesis on use and impact of gender in poetry. or, you could purchase the thesis online. either way, i see a book tour.

"England’s sun was SLOWLY setting o’er the hill-tops far away,
Filling all the land with beauty at the close of one sad day;
And its last rays kissed the forehead of a man and maiden fair,—
He with footsteps slow and weary; she with sunny, floating hair;
He with bowed head, sad and thoughtful; she with lips so cold and white,
Struggled to keep back the murmur, “Curfew must not ring to-night.”"
---Rose Hartwick Thorpe (1850– ?), Curfew must not ring Tonight.

Posted by: Itto Ogami at June 14, 2004 10:29 AM

HEY! jUST GET HER OFF THE CELL PHONE FOR CHRISTS SAKE!

Posted by: heroicimp at June 22, 2004 5:29 PM

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