March 16, 2005

Morning Sounds

Twee birds, rumbling boat horns,
rough timber movement

rolled up for the night
into a living room carpet spiral
with socks and cat toys,
spoons, string, lost chopsticks.

Leaned sideways through the timeline,
bending toward a corner wall.

And then shook out at new light.
Dropping like 6 am jacks
onto the hardwood floor.

What do you think?

Loved this one, C.V.! "rough timber movement" (great roll to that line), "Leaned sideways through the timeline." I sense a new music, and like it lots.

Posted by: rodney k. at March 16, 2005 1:59 PM

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