March 27, 2005

Sleeping in

Lying in bed
scooping a little more sleep

into my bowl, like soup
until the soup goes cold

and starts to overflow
onto the table.

There's the metal
of the ladel and it clinks

as a thin carrot wedge
rotates past

following the current
toward the table edge.

What do you think?

Sleep as soup? What've you been putting in your Wheaties, C.V.? Cool concept streteched to appealing extremes!

Posted by: rodney k. at March 28, 2005 8:37 AM

very dreamy, like the imagery. does sleep go cold? yes, as the day's reality kicks in like a mosquito bite.

"Methought I heard a voice cry, “Sleep no more!
Macbeth does murder sleep!” the innocent sleep,
Sleep that knits up the ravell’d sleave of care,
The death of each day’s life, sore labour’s bath,
Balm of hurt minds, great nature’s second course,
Chief nourisher in life’s feast."
---William Shakespeare, Macbeth

but, does macbeth murder soup? cruel oversight.

Posted by: Itto Ogami at May 9, 2005 8:33 AM

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