May 10, 2005

Back to back

My 3-year-old and me
back to back at a 
  Route 5
  pee shack
and there's this mighty roar 
pours out his two-foot frame.
The rush of my doom.
  As I'm flushed
               out the room.
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I've read this 5 times. Enjoyed it more each time. One of my favorites.

Posted by: Barbara at May 10, 2005 4:34 PM

Equally boisterous and poignant. Bravo!

Posted by: Kim at May 10, 2005 6:24 PM

i laughed, i cried. i had pee envy.

after watching 'revenge of the sith,' i hope that your 3 year-old's pee power will be harnessed to fight evil, and not manipulated by fox news and the dark side.

"So this is how liberty dies. With thunderous applause."
---George Lucas, Senator Amidala in Star Wars: Episode III: Revenge of the Sith

yeah, those state of the union standing ovations are loud.

Posted by: Itto Ogami at May 23, 2005 11:12 AM

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