July 18, 2005

My unkind moment

He looked like he was drawn 
not with a pen or a paintbrush
  but with the dull wet end of a used toothpick.
A dent. An imprint.
A soft image.
Leaving behind 
  a flaw designed primarily 
  to gather dust.
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So why the title change?

Posted by: Bill at July 19, 2005 6:57 AM

I wasn't crazy about the original title, kept mulling it during the day. Came up with this one last night. It does seem a bit like Cruel Verse to me, so....

Did you prefer the 1st one (Bent)...?

Posted by: cecil vortex at July 19, 2005 7:59 AM

No, I prefer this one, actually. Just curious.

Posted by: Bill at July 19, 2005 11:40 AM

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