April 18, 2006

Vocabulary turn

After a while
they wanted to get so used to it
they'd have
a different word for each kind of rain

say, one for fine-pointed rain
that comes down
light and silky

one for thick drops where the rain is thick no matter
how few drops fall.

And then on a turn, the end of rain
and a kind of
sunlight showed up
that was also fine-pointed.
Or maybe shy. Loud yawning? It was
sunny that day.

All the puddles
preparing to hibernate.

What do you think?

dig, dig, always love mentioning to people how eskimos belive that a horse running is a completely different thing than a horse standing still.

"And then on a turn, the end of rain
and a kind of
sunlight showed up"

really nice, cool, cool, stuff, 'nuff said

Posted by: heroic imp at April 19, 2006 7:01 PM

Yay--I love the whole thing, especially "fine-pointed sunlight" and the closer. Great closer--seriously.

Posted by: Laura at April 20, 2006 8:28 AM

That was beautiful. Almost makes me think I didn't mind the rain so much, in retrospect. Almost.

Posted by: Linda at May 2, 2006 8:19 AM

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