May 8, 2006

Short lines

At the coffee shop
a man long past down on his luck
head resting on a piece of paper

pen in one hand
but no words on the sheet.

Just 60 or 70 short lines
twitched in all directions.

A swarm of
"I mean no harm"
hand motions
for him to sleep inside.

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What do you think?

just 60 or 70...lines...twitched in all directions....very good stuff...unreal...crazy nice

Posted by: heroic imp at May 9, 2006 6:05 AM

I keep coming back to this. Got me from the first read.

Posted by: Barbara at May 11, 2006 11:58 AM

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