June 22, 2006

Your enemy

Watching the movie
of your life and there's
your enemy repositioned as
the hero

he's a maverick
standing center
sympathetic

and she digs him

noble
pauses

and all.

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Yowza! This one is super fantastique.

Posted by: kim at June 22, 2006 1:18 PM

Hits home, that's why I have to make some noize'a. Good , good, stuff, and more.

Posted by: heroic imp at June 26, 2006 6:23 AM

I'm really digging this one, too, and man-oh-man how I hate my enemy. That jerk gets all the breaks. Only trouble is, I keep reading it that YOU (CV) are watching the movie of MY life, and it's MY enemy that's now the hero. And so I wonder, Are you having a snicker at my expense? 'Cause if so, that ain't right!

Posted by: YS at June 26, 2006 12:38 PM

jinkies -- I have to think about that, YS. I definitely meant it the other way. But I can see your reading completely. And now I have to decide which one I like better......
-CV

Posted by: cecil vortex at June 26, 2006 9:21 PM

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