January 17, 2007

I Saw It

That tree at night is so beautiful.
I saw it. I saw the beauty.

I claim this vision with my
artist's eye. My eye so
true you crave to see
the beauty I see. You pose
and claim you saw it too.

You didn't see it.

What do you think?

I love the phrase 'I claim this vision with my artist's eye' - now that's beautiful... and original too!

Posted by: Opaleye at January 18, 2007 7:39 AM

Alright, you saw it, i didn't, now give me that saw and the rootbeer on the stump...

Posted by: heroic imp at January 19, 2007 7:37 AM

haha--hey, heroic imp, as long as you're cutting to the heart of things, there's a big stack of boxes upstairs that wants to be knocked over.

Posted by: e. at January 19, 2007 7:52 AM

But I saw you seeing it, and I therefore claim your vision with my observer's eye.

And your little dog too.

Posted by: So-Called Bill at January 19, 2007 8:29 AM

Dammit! And I was trying so hard to be a ninja artist --
stand between stalks of grass, bend my body to wrap around a breeze.

I think it was the clanky keys that gave me a way.

Or mebbe the little dog.

-Cecil

Posted by: Cecil Vortex at January 19, 2007 8:33 AM

sneeze, it was the sneeze

Posted by: heroic imp at January 19, 2007 3:57 PM

Yes. I saw it, too. I really did. Will send you a poem by Judson Jerome about what I didn't see, and neither did you.

Posted by: lemonblossom at January 20, 2007 5:07 PM

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